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Your Reader Wants To Know These 5 Things

Reasons whyThe other day, I was asked the following question:

“Why should the author of a product be included in their sales copy? Specifically, why do my readers need to know who I am or what I bring to the table? How does telling them my qualifications (or lack thereof) increase the strength of my copy?”

The author of the question then went on to say:

“My product solves a medical condition. But I am not a doctor and I have never had this condition myself. I’ve spent a year researching the best method to cure this condition. I have a list of 20,000 people with this condition and converse with them a lot. I know pretty much everything there is to know about this condition and have made it into an ebook.”

The answer is quite simple actually. In fact, in defending himself (i.e., that he’s not a doctor) the questioner answered his own question. Let me explain…


Why should people buy from you?

This is not some new concept. John E. Kennedy was the person who coined the term “Reasons Why Advertising,” if not the one who was credited as the creator of the concept back in 1905.

I’m a big fan of “reasons why” advertising. I always try to add as many reasons as possible why the offer is made, why the author is making it, and why it’s important to the reader.

Good, successful copy tells the reader why right upfront because they always ask. And if you don’t tell them, they’re left wondering why you left it out. It is almost always a direct advantage to tell your prospects why they should buy from you.

Additionally, you want to tell them the five major reasons why, which I talked about before:

  1. Why you (the reader)
  2. Why me (the author)
  3. Why this (the offer)
  4. Why now (the urgency)
  5. Why this price (the value)

1. Why You?

As part of the qualification process, your copy should address why the reader is targeted for this copy — and not just for the offer.

Why should they read your copy? And why is this important to them? Why is this product and this offer perfect for them? If not, who is it not for?

2. Why Me?

Credentialization is an important element in copy. You tell your readers why they should listen to you (or read what you have to say).

Expert or not, the more reasons you give, the more credible you are, the more believable your copy is, and the more apt people are to buy.

3. Why This?

Are you selling this product just to make money? Perhaps. But directly or indirectly, your product exists and your offer is made for specific reasons. So why not put them in your copy?

Don’t assume your reader knows or doesn’t care about them, no matter how trivial you may think they are. If you don’t include them in your copy, your readers will be the ones making assumptions. (And they won’t all be positive.)

4. Why Now?

Jim Rohn said, “Without a sense of urgency, desire loses its value.” Whether it’s direct (such as a deadline or limitation) or implied (such as missing out on something important), adding scarcity and urgency is important.

But by itself, urgency is almost always suspect. So back it up with reasons why your readers should act now. Don’t be shy in explaining why they must take advantage of the offer immediately, or what the consequences are if they don’t.


5. Why This Price?

Your price is based on industry averages. Or you’re doing a clearance sale to make way for new stock. Perhaps your product is new and you’re offering an introductory price.

But do your readers know? Really?

Don’t be afraid to tell your readers why they should pay what you’re asking for. At least compare your price to the ultimate cost of either not buying your product or buying an alternative (perhaps even competing) product instead.

The bottom-line?

Remember, the most important word in persuasion, according to Dr. Robert Cialdini, author of “Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion,” is not “you” or “free.”

It’s “because.”

Now, let me go back to the original question…

In this particular case, this person has quite a distinct selling point. They are what in marketing is referred to as the “anti-authority.”

The fact that they are NOT a doctor, which means they are more like their readers. Non-expert “lay people.” And therefore, they did all this research from a layperson’s perspective.

In other words, they did all the legwork for their readers, which not only saves them time but also is perceived as unbiased.

They did all the searching for them. They analyzed all the data (from an outsider’s vantage point) and cherrypicked the best answers. And they condensed and distilled their findings into one, easy-to-read, easy-to-find place.

Add to that the fact that they conversed with over 20,000 people afflicted with this condition and know almost everything about it, makes them a lot more credible than some general practitioner who may have come across just a few hundred cases in their practice.

So, why you? Because you are the expert on this subject. Use your credibility and experience as a selling point, don’t hide from it.

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Michel Fortin is a direct response copywriter, author, speaker, consultant, and CEO of The Success Doctor, Inc. Visit his blog and signup free to get tested conversion strategies and response-boosting tips by email, along with blog updates, news, and more! Go now to http://www.michelfortin.com.

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Comments

  1. From Donovan

    Michel, you are a f&%@!ng genius man! Like a walking-encyclopedia of free marketing and copywritng information…

    Thanks for sharing so much with us.

    ~ Donovan

    Author's Website January 11th, 2008

  2. From Marasoiu Marian

    Way I do not respond of your qustion?
    1. because all you do a big mistake
    2 you requet money under you have and to do wat you do the best
    3 are greeding of money you not have a patiente
    4 not offer nating free and not explain simplu wat you do with a computer in a smool business.
    5 the great answer your recived :you are not ready with a project best thinking for to development and grow your affair,business.You must look wat is your progress in 2007 in compare with year 2006.I do not your grow but I estimed your growing of 6-7%.or is it too much?

    Author's Website January 12th, 2008

  3. From Michel Fortin

    @Marasoiu:

    Maybe it’s a language barrier, but I don’t understand your comment. Sorry.

    Author's Website January 13th, 2008

  4. From Justin Bryce

    Hi Michel

    Awesome post as usual.

    Can you please add a Print Format button. I prefer to print your posts and add them to my folder. Call me old fashion but I am always referring to them so it is easier.

    Thanks
    Justin

    Author's Website January 13th, 2008

  5. From Andre

    This is a clear reminder of why people come to your site in the first place.

    First they search the web, (google-yahoo), they use many related keywords and end up on your page, hopefully your site is optimized for the ones they used, (as dan kennedy would say…Message to Market Match) now that they are there, you want to enter into the conversation they are already thinking of.

    Since people search for info (thus solutions) to solve a concern, they are not casually searching, Even when someone else send them your message and page must be set up correctly to answer the questions they have or you’ll simply lose them.

    It is in your interest (and theirs) to not distract them from what they came for. So give them in as much clear detail as possible on the subject. (without a bunch of links that will distract them from the goal of that page.)
    bullet points with clear benefits is a great way to do this.

    Sometime you can answer those five question with the use of bullet points alone.

    As they read your copy, I recommend you take them down a journey that answers the questions they came there for, then ask for the sale. I recommend that you ask for the sale/opting etc. every two to three paragraphs if that’s the goal of the page.

    Then at the bottom of the page add additional resources… or better yet, use the additional resources after the sale/optin as a bonus.

    Most pages I see (including some of my old site pages) ask the prospect to do to much. too many links etc. I now know (and my conversion speak to that) that when you give them no more than 1-3 actions to take (again depending on your goal for that page) you’ll have a clearer message and can accomplish what Micheal is saying.

    Thanks for the clear reminder Micheal.

    Andre’

    Author's Website January 13th, 2008

  6. From Kidblogger :: Carl Ocab

    Wow, this is awesome Michel. What do you think of using pseudonyms for products like that?

    P.S. The second banner in your blog sponsors area leads to a dead link.

    Kudos to you for this remarkable article!

    Author's Website January 14th, 2008

  7. From Franck Silvestre

    Thanks, I will try to add these “five” in my next newsletter.

    As for the one who asked, although he is not a doctor, he is an expert. And many people prefer to trust a close friend than a doctor (I don’t trust doctors at all~!)

    Author's Website January 14th, 2008

  8. From Terry Reeves.com

    Answering all of the “objections” leaves just one final question.

    Where do I sign?

    If it only worked that way every time.

    Author's Website January 15th, 2008

  9. From charles s

    Thanks, very good post. see tip jar

    chuck

    Author's Website January 25th, 2008

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