The Birth of a Better Salesletter

Authority Site Blackbook by Jack HumphreySome marketers “get it.”

When I wrote my free white paper, “The Death of The Salesletter,” I mentioned that the web is changing, whether we agree with it or not. Long-copy, text-only, static salesletters are slowly being replaced by more dynamic, cleaner, pithier, multimedia-based, content-driven sales messages.

One case in point is my friend Jack Humphey and his Authority Site Center. His latest product, launched today, is a membership site that teaches people how to create “authority sites” that drive traffic and sell products through content, in particular with the help of Web 2.0 websites, communities, and applications.

Jack actually offers a free report himself on this latest trend. You can download it for free — there’s a mini-video introduction that leads to an opt-in page, where Jack offers his free report, the “Authority Site Blackbook,” after you sign up.

But let me bring your attention to the salesletter for his new product, which is what I really want to focus on and what’s pretty amazing…

Granted, the special report is loaded with great information on the latest trends in creating authority sites, and how Web 2.0 is changing things — from RSS marketing and social media, to video marketing and blogging.

(I highly recommend that you at least download it and read it. It’s pretty good stuff.)

Before I tell you about some of the latest strategies used in this salesletter, let me give you a bit of a preamble.

According to Jack, “As Web 2.0 becomes less of just a buzzword and more of a reality, cookie-cutter article sites are on the way out. Web surfers will become more value-focused and web companies will become larger.”

He adds, “Over the next few years, expect larger conglomerates to be buying up profitable websites in their chosen markets. Expect smaller sites to either be bought or driven out of business. My intention is not to scare you, but this outcome is inevitable.”

As a result, the trends are pointing to an increasing popularity — and demand — for what Jack calls “authority sites.”

This is not a new term. According to Jason Dowdell of Global Promoter, “Authority sites are sites that have been linked to and referenced on other web sites covering the same subject matter and they also will have hundreds if not thousands of pages covering that subject matter and nearly every facet of it.”

With Google slapping sites like crazy, and the emergence of their brand-new Pay-Per-Action program just launched this week, pageranks are increasingly favoring sites that are linked to, talked about, and regarded as useful resources — with authoritative content, links, tools, and discussions.

But the key question is, what do 99.9% of authority sites provide?

In a sentence, an incredible amount of original content and a superb visitor experience. That’s what the search engines want, and as a result they are penalizing the converse — think splogs, link farms, and content-less sites.

According to Jack, “The search engines want you to succeed and they want you to make money, but you have to play by their rules.” To that end, he adds, “In the future, focus your efforts on visitor optimization and content optimization, instead of search engine optimization.”

The rest will work itself out in the end. (I agree.)

Furthermore, “You want to create a site that generates thousands of visitors a day mainly through the major search engines, and would ultimately be the one-stop source for information in that particular market.”

In fact, Jack defines three types of authority sites: 1) Dynamic, 2) Interactive, and 3) Consistent. He even offers some examples of each one.

I’m a big proponent of niche marketing for many other reasons, beyond traffic generation. I’ve written about this many times in the past, so I’ll stop here.

Just keep in mind that Jack offers some incredibly insightful content on the matter. You’re better off getting the free report for more details.

Granted, it does promote a product in the end. But it’s the salesletter that promotes this product that I want to show you, where Jack applied many of the strategies I cover in my Death of The Salesletter report.

In my estimation, there’s still a bit of work needed. It’s not perfect by any stretch. But it’s definitely several steps ahead of most clunky-looking, long-scrolling, ugly salesletters we see so much of these days.

For example, you’ll notice several video snippets strategically located throughout the page. There’s even a dynamic countdown alert at the top telling you how many spots are left.

The letter offers tons of proof, and even provides a video tour. Plus, Jack offers a video showing actual examples of authority sites — so you can immediately grasp what the concept is all about, from both visual and auditory standpoints.

Scroll down a bit more and you will see the first-ever, dynamically loaded, “testimonial tag cloud.” This is pretty cool: you click on any name in the tag cloud, and the testimonial opens up on the page, on the fly.

Next, and after a few video testimonials, there’s the order form. It’s like most order forms you see on these types of salesletters. But the neat part is, you have a list of commonly asked questions that follows.

At first glance, these seem to be just regular links. But when you click on them, the answers “fly in” automatically on the same page. (People are not driven away and get only the answers they need, and therefore they are not distracted and follow the flow of the pitch.)

There are a couple of other items on this salesletter that makes it very appealing, easy to navigate, visitor-driven, and dynamic. I still find the letter a bit long and clunky, but it’s a lot better than most salesletters I’ve seen.

Bottom line, we’re getting there.

The question is, does it work? When I first saw this letter, I knew it would do well does because my findings were based on actual test results.

But I was curious, so I called Jack on the phone a few days ago. And he told me that, in preliminary “pre-launch tests,” the letter is converting at a pretty impressive rate. (A lot better than I anticipated.)

I can’t disclose the actual conversion rate because Jack didn’t give me permission. But let me just say that the letter is successfully converting more sales than 80-90% of websites out there.

Bravo, Jack, for an awesome salesletter. To me, being an authority also means “leading the way.” And Jack Humphrey is definitely someone you should watch out for.

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  • Raj
    Dear Michel,

    I have gone through this Black Book. It's just amazing. It opens completely a new horizon of Web2.0 world. I do believe that Jack has done very hard efforts to create it. Some of those links are like never ending. And One most imp thing, He has revealed a big resource which others are still hiding.

    Bravo Man...Jack.

    Raj.
  • Yes, the book and the product itself are great examples. Some people have already emailed me telling me "this is not revolutionary," or "this is just a typical salesletter." I want to reiterate something.

    1) I did say that it wasn't revolutionary. It needs work. But it is a step or two above most salesletters out there -- and I only want to show some examples of some of the strategies I talked about in my report.

    2) The product in itself is an example of the concepts I talked about on my report -- i.e., using Web 2.0 and content to drive traffic and sell.

    Some of the more "revolutionary" sales experiences are being done right now, mostly by large websites and companies. Unfortunately, I cannot talk about them because they are done by my students and partners, who work with these large clients to create and test these new salesletters, who have put me under a non-disclosure.

    I wish I could. Really. It would blow you away!

    But if you want some "Examples" of some of these new strategies, pay close attention to some of the case studies used by Flint McLaughlin at:

    http://www.marketingexperiments.com/

    (Hint, hint.)
  • Raj
    Yes Michel, I do agree with you once more.

    Jack has truly promoted himself with this big resource. I don't know what will be an impact to others, but I am sure, I have a treasure of ideas for promoting Websites in such a way!.....I am sure, Spec. My brother who is helping me out to promote my website will be soared with this!...

    Expecting More Success to Jack and of course to You, Brother!

    Raj
    Happiness through Taste!
  • Dear Michel

    Jack Humphrey's book?

    Just read it right through and it's a marvellous resource.

    I have to say though that thanks to Ken Evoy I came to the conclusion that authority sites where the way to go about 4 years ago. So am well down that path.

    But this new factor of integrating it with Web2 as outlined by Jack is a very recent realisation for me, and this is the first resource I have seen that ties it all together.

    Jack's book is a work of deep understanding, but written so that I 'get it' easily.

    However, I am puzzled about your comments re Jack's sales letter. What do you think could be improved? Stumps me, looks perfect.

    Jonathan
  • Jack is THE MAN with this stuff. He's also quite adept at craps, as my wife can attest. The promo for this book is an excellent example of where this industry is headed - you really need audio/video to make a hit, and be taken seriously. A picture is worth a thousand words? I think that's really video these days... and it can do a LOT for a sales letter... adding a thousand words effortlessly.

    Thanks for keeping tabs on this Michel; and let's get together at a seminar down the road!
  • I've been reading the fridayreport for a while now, and it's true that Jack's teaching when it comes to the web 2.0 is excellent.

    I will read this report now.
  • Hi Michel,

    Thank you for all the information about Jack and about the "authority sites." I can understand "content optimization," but I will be interested to see what he means by "visitor optimization."

    Thanks for keeping us informed about what is to come.

    Regards,
    Siriol Jameson
  • Ana
    Thanks for the recommendation Michel.

    I just finished reading the authority black book and I must say it is brilliant. The sales letter for the product is amazing. I also liked the cool animation for the book download.

    Off to read death of the salesletter now.

    Regards,

    Ana
  • Dear Michel,

    I've been following your blog now for about 5 months (since I heard you speak at the Big Seminar) and definitely enjoy your take on sales letters. I've purchased several of your recommendations including Glyphius. To me, Jack Humphrey's page may be full of great 2.0 techniques, but content just doesn't grab me. It seems so typical.

    In my search to find something that has more pizazz in a sales page, I ended up reading master copywriter Joe Sugerman's "Advertising Secrets of the Written Word." Although his craft was honed on his JS&A direct mail catalog (which used to mesmerize me), I find his suggestions to be quite applicable for reaching people with an online sales letter. His short headlines wouldn't rank high in Glyphius, but they obviously still made millions. I feel Sugerman's "slippery slide" approach which is designed to compel readers to keep reading right down to the bottom of the letter deserves serious consideration. I, for one, would love to hear your expert opinion on his approach.

    John Souter
  • Nigel J Britton
    Hi Michel,

    Once again your resources have come up trumps. The impact of Web 2.0 is here for all to see, only if they have a copy of the Blackbook!

    As a copywriter, do you envisage the total demise of static sites altogether?

    I look forward to your response, friend.

    Nigel J Britton
  • Static websites? No. But metrics used to measure static websites? Yes. The "pageview" is definitely on the way out. (In fact, famous blogger Steve Rubel of MicroPersuasion.com wrote a blog post called "death of the pageview.")

    I don't think static sites are going to die. Many sites are static that are greatly trafficked and helpful. Think Wikipedia, for example. But as the name implies, it's a "wiki" therefore it's user-generated, and database-driven. So it's not "static" in the purest sense. So I guess the answer is the purely static website will be replaced eventually.
  • Nigel J Britton
    Thanks Michel,

    I guess relationship marketing will come to the fore then.

    Interactivity through copy, auditory and visual means?

    Nigel
  • Yes, indeed. It really all boils down to connecting with your readers, your audience, your market. This has always been important, of course. But now, the tools that allow it, as well as the demand for it, are increasing.

    I my report, I talked about the "evolution" and the "revolution" both taking place. And we are only starting to scratch the surface.
  • Nigel J Britton
    Thanks Michel,

    It makes a lot of sense, human nature stays the same I suppose, just addressing things differently, still feeding the basic needs of our clients.

    Nigel
  • I have worked with Jack before and he's one of the good guys. He knows his stuff.
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