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How to Write a Persuasive News Release

newspaper boxThe most profitable and often overlooked free publicity generator is the news release (also called "press release", although news release is a better term).

News releases are not only great marketing tools but also far more credible and believable than advertising since they appear to come from an objective third party.

While publicity is the most powerful promotional tool there is, it is the one that is the least effectively used.

All too often, business owners view news releases as a form of advertising. The copy is self-serving, promotional in tone, and one-sided, and offer no real value to a news-reading audience.

Don't get me wrong. The media’s goal is to report on stories that affect, or are of interest to, their readers or viewers. So, news releases are their best friends — but only if they follow a few important guidelines.


The media are constantly on the lookout for good stories that are of interest to their audience. Reporters, writers, producers, and editors have a particular interest in reporting on stories that help to enhance sponsorship interest in the medium that they represent.

The first and most important thing to keep in mind is, news releases are not ads. The media are not in the business to provide free advertising. If you're guilty of this, they will most likely tell you that you should have called the advertising department instead.

But if done right, they can provide an incredible amount of free exposure, generate instant credibility, and persuade audiences more effectively than most paid advertisements can.

So, what makes a good story?

While the answer to such a subjective question can be difficult, here are a few pointers in order to guide you in writing and targeting your news releases.

Be Newsworthy, NOT Promotional

Reporters are always looking for newsworthy items on which to report — that's what reporters do. But they specifically like human interest stories, stories that are related to current events or important issues, or those that have some emotional appeal.

Larger media also like stories that appeal to a wide audience. Targeted or specialized media, on the other hand, love to report on stories that appeal to their specific market and thus help capture more of it. In turn, they can qualify interested prospects far more effectively than some mainstream, large-circulation medium.

Of course, the foundational component of the news release is the news aspect. A good story must be newsworthy for it to be considered.

While there are thousands of ways to present a news release, there is no one "correct" way of doing it. There are as many different ways to present a news release as there are publications out there.

For example, in my experience the news release should not tell the entire story. If you do have a good story to tell, your news release should provide enough information to generate interest and it must say just enough to incite the media to want to know more.

A news release is like a resume, which is not meant to land a job but to land an interview. In the same way, a news release is not meant to get instant media coverage but should be used as a tool for sparking interest and curiosity among a very busy and exceedingly leery staff of reporters and editors — and it must do so quickly and efficiently.

Therefore, the headline as well as the first few lines should instantly communicate something worthy of their attention. In fact, news releases should at least possess certain key elements, which are:

  • A strong, compelling headline;
  • An appealing, informative story;
  • A professional, tasteful appearance;
  • A number of quotes and reactions;
  • And the sender's contact information.

More important, your news release must be devoid of any conspicuous fluff. Unlike hard-hitting, hype-filled salesletters, news releases are more intriguing, content-driven, and informative or educational in nature.

Remember that a reporter is not just a middleperson whose job is to report your story for you. Your release must sell the reporter on your story as well. Therefore, write it to read like a story. Look at it from the reporter's perspective. In other words, write the story for them.

An excellent news release can also be a powerful business tool for gaining free media coverage for your company, product, or service — and keep in mind that media coverage tends to be a more effective form of promotion than advertising since it is coming from an objective third party.

It can be used for announcing important company changes, special events, new appointments or recruits within your organization, or the launch of your company's new product, service, or website.

Be Unique, NOT Superior

Focus on leadership rather than superiority. This can be easily achieved by being the first in some category. When you’re the first in something or in some way, you not only attract attention but also generate implied superiority, which is more powerful than some nebulous claim or platitude.

Other than using controversy, or better yet riding the coattails of a major news item or an important social issue, being unique in some way helps to generate a lot of buzz almost instantly. It’s an effective tool that can also help spark more interest in your news release.

Remember, your news release is selected because — and often, only because — of what it can do for the medium.

Buzz generates higher readership. Since the media profits by selling advertising, and prices it based on their audience size, then the more interesting your story is to their readers the greater the chances will be they will select your story.

For example, if you can support the fact that your product is the first in its category, that your service is the first to be delivered in a certain way, or that your event is the first or largest of its kind, you can and should use that information in your news release.

Obviously, a company claiming to be the best is never a news item. But a company claiming to be the first at something always is. Capitalize on it when approaching the media. Look for ways to market your story differently by presenting it with a different angle or a unique twist.

For example, think of the times you've seen a story about someone starting a business. While it may sound trivial or insignificant, if that person is also a local politician, suffers from a disability, or has 10 children, then the story isn’t as trivial. (Take the story of Ladan Lashkari, for instance.)

In other words, bring your own unique angle or experience into your news release. Never discount the power of telling your own personal story.

Here’s a real-life example. One of my clients was an inventor and entrepreneur. His product was a backpack with special, large straps that made carrying it a little more comfortable.

The funny thing is, after some questioning I later discovered that he lost one leg in a car accident. After some prodding, he confided that his invention was the result of wanting to lessen the pressure of the backpack’s weight on his shoulders because of his single leg.

At first, he felt his story was insignificant. Since most hikers are two-legged and comprise the bulk of his target market, he concluded that his story would take away from the benefits of his product.

Well, I told him to capitalize on his seemingly "insignificant" story.

Even though he wasn’t a hiker, the news release talked about his lack of one leg as being the inspiration behind the creation of his backpack. The headline? "One-legged man lightens hikers’ loads."

The key is to be able to capture the interest of reporters who are bombarded with literally thousands of news releases each and every business day.

As in this case, human interest aspects are wonderful tools to spark interest. Adding a special human element or some emotional appeal — even blending it with an important social issue — will up your chances.

Don’t Inform, Connect!

For a great sample of an effective news release, take a look at this one by work-at-home mom Leslie Spencer. She operates an online professional association called "Home-Based Working Moms (HBWM)," which offers education and resources for mothers who run home-based businesses.

Her goal was ultimately to get exposure to, and to increase memberships of, a specific target market. (By the way, Leslie follows another important rule of online marketing — niche marketing, which is also a great way for gaining attention from the media.)

She wrote an excellent news release that successfully tied-in the benefits of her business with the current challenges faced by most stay-at-home moms — women who want to be more involved with their children while at the same time contributing to the family's income.

Her news release, entitled "The New Entrepreneur: Shorts, Shirt  and… a Stroller? Moms Find Ways to Combine Career with Children," provides the media with a great story to tell.

That said, you may feel that you're not a skilled writer — either that or you probably don't have the time to write one let alone distribute it.

The following are great sources for help in writing, targeting, and distributing news releases, particularly electronically. Many provide the full service while others only provide guidelines as well as lists of media contacts.

Target Your Market… And Your Media


A news release sent to the general media often gets lost in a sea of others. Most often, it will end up on some editor's desk where your story will be screened and, if judged newsworthy, passed along to a particular reporter in the organization.

However, special features writers, columnists, radio show hosts, news anchors, specialized media representatives, special interest publishers, trade publication editors, specialty channel producers, radio show (or segment) hosts and so on are particularly beneficial.

First, a news release sent to a specific person (and not the general newsroom or media entity) has definitely better chances of being noticed and reported — it doesn't have to go through so many hands.

While it may require a little research, remember that the media are made up of people too. They like the personalized approach just as much as your clients do.

Second, targeting your news release is far more effective, for the results you want your release to achieve will be substantially higher when reported in a medium that targets your specific market as precisely as possible.

Ask the following: "Where does my niche or target market hang out? What do they read? What shows do they watch? What programs do they prefer? To which ezines or blogs are they subscribed? What websites do they surf? On what discussion boards or forums do they participate? With what associations or trade organizations are they affiliated?"

The media's greatest concern is their audience and especially their ratings (because it leads to advertising revenue), not the stories on which they report. Therefore, targeting your media is just as important as targeting your market.

Often, specialized publications or media will be much more receptive to your news release than a larger, more generic entity, since it specifically and more directly relates to their audiences.

But the added benefit is, not only your chances of being reported will increase, but also you will, in turn, attract qualified, targeted prospects.

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    From Andrew Cavanagh

    A few extra tips that no one every talks about in press release writing.

    I was interviewed by about 20 different radio stations before I discovered “the secret” to getting ongoing media exposure.

    And when I applied this secret it got me on a show that fed to 40 commercial radio stations repeatedly for over 2 years.

    I appeared on that show for 2 hours at a time and I was allowed to do a full on pitch for my product at the end.

    I used the same secret to make the front page of the newspaper repeatedly and get on TV news.

    I turn down more media coverage in a year than most people will get in a lifetime.

    What is this secret.

    Write your press release in pairs and pitch the next story before, during or immediately after your interview…
    copywriting1.com/2007/03/6-rules-to-creating-killer-press.ht…

    Also most press releases are waaaaay too long.

    If you can’t do it on one double spaced page you’ve got a problem.

    Because reporters and radio hosts will only read the first page.

    Anything else is superfluous.

    The objective is to get the media to call you for more information as Michel suggests.

    But it goes further than that.

    If you’re smart you’ll include suggested questions…that way your reporter or radio host doesn’t have to do any work.

    Just call you up and ask the questions.

    See a proven press release template here…
    copywriting1.com/2007/03/press-release-template.html

    Finally, while free publicity can be enormously profitable most people make peanuts if anything…just thrilled they got “exposure”.

    That’s just about as STUPID as repeatedly paying for image advertising to “get your name out there”.

    You need to measure the response you get from your free publicity because it ain’t free.

    It takes a lot of time and effort to get yourself on radio, on the television and in the newspapers and magazines.

    It’s just another form of advertising that you “pay” for with high quality content and the time and effort it takes to give a good interview…
    http://www.copywriting1.com/2006/07/radio-copywriting.html

    I have met very, very few people who really have any idea how to convert free publicity into real income which is a shame because it can be a genuine gold mine if you approach it the right way.

    Kindest regards,
    Andrew Cavanagh

    Author's Website May 25th, 2007

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    From Michel Fortin

    EXCELLENT! As always, thank you, Andrew.

    Author's Website May 25th, 2007

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    From Mr. Ehi. Michael

    Dear Sir,

    can i ask for help or assistance form?
    Thanks.

    Author's Website May 25th, 2007

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    From Angela Wills

    Oh this is excellent timing for me now that I’m about to do my first press release. Thank you!

    Author's Website May 25th, 2007

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    From Floyd Fisher

    Mike:

    You just answered a question I was asking myself. Thanks!

    -Floyd

    Author's Website May 25th, 2007

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    From Michel Fortin

    Great! I’m glad it was helpful.

    @Ehi:

    If you need help, then contact support at http://www.copydoctormembers.com/ or http://www.successdoctor.com/contact/

    Thanks.

    Author's Website May 26th, 2007

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    From Joan Stewart, The Publicity Hound

    Michael:

    Many of your tips are great, but people who write press releases shouldn’t be writing only for journalists. They should be writing for spiders.

    A press release that’s optimized for the search engines can pull in consumers like a huge magnet. Those consumers can then sign up for an ezine or a free download and enter your sales funnel. They might even buy from you today, even if no journalists think your release is worthy of their time or attention.

    As a publicity expert, I get more questions on this topic than any other. So I created a free press release writing tutorial called “89 ways to write powerful press releases.” Anyone can opt into it at http://www.PublicityHound.com/pressreleasetips/art.htm

    It’s a very long course–89 lessons in all. But when you’re finished, you will have earned a master’s degree in press release writing. And you will know more about how to write and distribute press releases than than most professional PR people.

    By way of background, I was a newspaper editor and reporter for 22 years, and I have accepted and rejected literally thousands (and maybe even millions) of press releases.

    Author's Website May 26th, 2007

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    From Michel Fortin

    Thanks, Joan! Indeed. These are great points. (And yes, I know of you very well. I’ve been following The Publicity Hound for many years.)

    And I should have added your site as a resource. So folks, if you want to know more about Joan, please visit:

    http://www.publicityhound.com/

    Definitely a must-subscribe!

    (Again, thanks Joan.)

    Author's Website May 26th, 2007

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    From sujith

    A question for Andrew cavanagh…

    I live outside usa , can the radio stations interview by phone ?

    Or is a personal visit to local radio station neccesary for the radio interview ?

    Michel , As always great tips !

    Author's Website May 26th, 2007

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    From Franck Silvestre

    I used Press Releases last year, and from now, I am going to send a Press Release with PRweb each and everymonth for my product.

    Joan, I will take your 89 parts course. It’s the longer e-course I subscribed to to date.

    Author's Website May 29th, 2007

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    From Katie Cummings

    I think the most important part is the section about connecting rather than informing. All too often we speak down to readers and they hate that. It is vital to connect with them for so many reasons including gaining trust and readership.

    Author's Website May 29th, 2007

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    From Tom Chandler

    Michael: I’d sure love to weigh in on this issue with some authority, but even after a zillion press releases, I still tend to write them like miniature ads.

    Guess I’m newsworthiness challenged.

    Good advice as always!

    Author's Website May 30th, 2007

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    From Dimano Marketing

    Here is a great article on the Secrets of Sending Press Releases. It looks at a few of the best practices of PR and media professionals. Check it out. Thanks -The Dimano Marketing Team

    dimanomarketing.wordpress.com/2007/06/19/the-secret-of-sendi…

    Author's Website June 20th, 2007

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    From Ponn Sabra

    Hi Michael!

    Nice resources, thanks.

    I can’t agree with Joan enough, and yes, her work is a must-subscribe/must-read!

    Here are a few resources you and your readers would definitely appreciate, as great follow-up material:

    1. PRWeb.com and I have been giving away $200 PRWeb.com Premium press releases away since April 2007, details for anyone to claim theirs today are here. By the way, prior to our launch, PRWeb.com has never offered any one a gift/bonus of this magnitude before. We have an unique partnership that I treasure, and feel humbled to have.

    2. I have an unique Online Press Release series that includes topics like:

    a. Online Press Releases vs. Offline (with diagrams showing the difference in marketing reach both have.

    b. Online Press Releases - How-to Target Your Ideal Client/Customer/Reader

    c. Online Press Release *are* Cheaper, Better, Faster than running a Pay-per-click campaign.

    d. The Internet’s Ultimate List of Online Press Release Distribution Centers, ranked by Google PageRank with 1-3 line descriptions of each service

    3. Lesley Spencer-Pyle, is a dear colleague/friend of mine and she writes incredible online and offline press releases. Having been a Public Relations Specialist prior to starting her home-based business, HBWM.com, she has years of experience in writing press releases that gets attention. She also knows a great opportunity when she sees one, and has herself capitalized on her free $200 PRWeb.com press release through me, and we both actively promote this offer to her members; because it includes a PRWeb.com 1-hour webinar that teaches you exactly how to utilize all the resources with its premium package. Having used their services for over 2.5 years, I was surprised to learn anything new, but in fact, learned a great deal from this webinar. Lesley agrees that with technology changing, the webinar was ideal for even the seasoned PR Copywriter that she is.

    Hope these resources help ;-)

    To our success & empowerment,
    Ponn

    P.S. I’m sure you don’t remember me Micheal, but I submitted my press release to your forums when I started out early in 2005, and was ripped apart by many members. This was great education, by the way ;-) I was a student of Alice Seba then, and I find that forum thread still survives in Goggle searches to remind of my humble beginnings online. :-)

    My point is: I couldn’t write a “decent” online press releases back then (though I wrote them for years as an offline government official), and now here I am a well-paid search engine optimized online press release copywriter, I’m an Evangelist educating and promoting everyone the web (particularly online business owners, such as internet marketers and bloggers who do not appreciate press releases) about their grave impact as a optimal internet marketing technique, and have a unique partnership with one of the web’s greatest online distribution centers: PRWeb.com.

    How? Because I write and publish regular and consistent online press releases. I started off writing them weekly 2.5 years ago, and now I write them at least monthly.

    PRWeb.com has the technical resources and incredible customer services, to help all their clients write editorially-acceptable press releases, and ones that are read. Every single press release is read by an editor and *must* achieve an editorial score of 4 of 6 to be published. This human-barrier helps any novice copywriter (a) learn the craft of writing a press release and not over-sell in an “ad” format, (b) learn the art of writing press releases for the spiders *and* traditional media outlets.

    Author's Website July 2nd, 2007

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    From Carole DeJarnatt

    I am in the beginning stages of writing a couple of press releases for a client of mine. Thank you for the article and instructions to success!

    Carole

    Author's Website July 8th, 2007

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