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How to Write a Persuasive News Release

How to Write a Persuasive News Release

newspaper boxThe most prof­itable and often over­looked free pub­lic­ity gen­er­a­tor is the news release (also called “press release”, although news release is a bet­ter term).

News releases are not only great mar­ket­ing tools but also far more cred­i­ble and believ­able than adver­tis­ing since they appear to come from an objec­tive third party.

While pub­lic­ity is the most pow­er­ful pro­mo­tional tool there is, it is the one that is the least effec­tively used.

All too often, busi­ness own­ers view news releases as a form of adver­tis­ing. The copy is self-​​serving, pro­mo­tional in tone, and one-​​sided, and offer no real value to a news-​​reading audience.

Don’t get me wrong. The media’s goal is to report on sto­ries that affect, or are of inter­est to, their read­ers or view­ers. So, news releases are their best friends — but only if they fol­low a few impor­tant guidelines.

The media are con­stantly on the look­out for good sto­ries that are of inter­est to their audi­ence. Reporters, writ­ers, pro­duc­ers, and edi­tors have a par­tic­u­lar inter­est in report­ing on sto­ries that help to enhance spon­sor­ship inter­est in the medium that they represent.

The first and most impor­tant thing to keep in mind is, news releases are not ads. The media are not in the busi­ness to pro­vide free adver­tis­ing. If you’re guilty of this, they will most likely tell you that you should have called the adver­tis­ing depart­ment instead.

But if done right, they can pro­vide an incred­i­ble amount of free expo­sure, gen­er­ate instant cred­i­bil­ity, and per­suade audi­ences more effec­tively than most paid adver­tise­ments can.

So, what makes a good story?

While the answer to such a sub­jec­tive ques­tion can be dif­fi­cult, here are a few point­ers in order to guide you in writ­ing and tar­get­ing your news releases.

Be News­wor­thy, NOT Promotional

Reporters are always look­ing for news­wor­thy items on which to report — that’s what reporters do. But they specif­i­cally like human inter­est sto­ries, sto­ries that are related to cur­rent events or impor­tant issues, or those that have some emo­tional appeal.

Larger media also like sto­ries that appeal to a wide audi­ence. Tar­geted or spe­cial­ized media, on the other hand, love to report on sto­ries that appeal to their spe­cific mar­ket and thus help cap­ture more of it. In turn, they can qual­ify inter­ested prospects far more effec­tively than some main­stream, large-​​circulation medium.

Of course, the foun­da­tional com­po­nent of the news release is the news aspect. A good story must be news­wor­thy for it to be considered.

While there are thou­sands of ways to present a news release, there is no one “cor­rect” way of doing it. There are as many dif­fer­ent ways to present a news release as there are pub­li­ca­tions out there.

For exam­ple, in my expe­ri­ence the news release should not tell the entire story. If you do have a good story to tell, your news release should pro­vide enough infor­ma­tion to gen­er­ate inter­est and it must say just enough to incite the media to want to know more.

A news release is like a resume, which is not meant to land a job but to land an inter­view. In the same way, a news release is not meant to get instant media cov­er­age but should be used as a tool for spark­ing inter­est and curios­ity among a very busy and exceed­ingly leery staff of reporters and edi­tors — and it must do so quickly and efficiently.

There­fore, the head­line as well as the first few lines should instantly com­mu­ni­cate some­thing wor­thy of their atten­tion. In fact, news releases should at least pos­sess cer­tain key ele­ments, which are:

  • A strong, com­pelling headline;
  • An appeal­ing, infor­ma­tive story;
  • A pro­fes­sional, taste­ful appearance;
  • A num­ber of quotes and reactions;
  • And the sender’s con­tact information.

More impor­tant, your news release must be devoid of any con­spic­u­ous fluff. Unlike hard-​​hitting, hype-​​filled saleslet­ters, news releases are more intrigu­ing, content-​​driven, and infor­ma­tive or edu­ca­tional in nature.

Remem­ber that a reporter is not just a mid­dleper­son whose job is to report your story for you. Your release must sell the reporter on your story as well. There­fore, write it to read like a story. Look at it from the reporter’s per­spec­tive. In other words, write the story for them.

An excel­lent news release can also be a pow­er­ful busi­ness tool for gain­ing free media cov­er­age for your com­pany, prod­uct, or ser­vice — and keep in mind that media cov­er­age tends to be a more effec­tive form of pro­mo­tion than adver­tis­ing since it is com­ing from an objec­tive third party.

It can be used for announc­ing impor­tant com­pany changes, spe­cial events, new appoint­ments or recruits within your orga­ni­za­tion, or the launch of your company’s new prod­uct, ser­vice, or website.

Be Unique, NOT Superior

Focus on lead­er­ship rather than supe­ri­or­ity. This can be eas­ily achieved by being the first in some cat­e­gory. When you’re the first in some­thing or in some way, you not only attract atten­tion but also gen­er­ate implied supe­ri­or­ity, which is more pow­er­ful than some neb­u­lous claim or platitude.

Other than using con­tro­versy, or bet­ter yet rid­ing the coat­tails of a major news item or an impor­tant social issue, being unique in some way helps to gen­er­ate a lot of buzz almost instantly. It’s an effec­tive tool that can also help spark more inter­est in your news release.

Remem­ber, your news release is selected because — and often, only because — of what it can do for the medium.

Buzz gen­er­ates higher read­er­ship. Since the media prof­its by sell­ing adver­tis­ing, and prices it based on their audi­ence size, then the more inter­est­ing your story is to their read­ers the greater the chances will be they will select your story.

For exam­ple, if you can sup­port the fact that your prod­uct is the first in its cat­e­gory, that your ser­vice is the first to be deliv­ered in a cer­tain way, or that your event is the first or largest of its kind, you can and should use that infor­ma­tion in your news release.

Obvi­ously, a com­pany claim­ing to be the best is never a news item. But a com­pany claim­ing to be the first at some­thing always is. Cap­i­tal­ize on it when approach­ing the media. Look for ways to mar­ket your story dif­fer­ently by pre­sent­ing it with a dif­fer­ent angle or a unique twist.

For exam­ple, think of the times you’ve seen a story about some­one start­ing a busi­ness. While it may sound triv­ial or insignif­i­cant, if that per­son is also a local politi­cian, suf­fers from a dis­abil­ity, or has 10 chil­dren, then the story isn’t as triv­ial. (Take the story of Ladan Lashkari, for instance.)

In other words, bring your own unique angle or expe­ri­ence into your news release. Never dis­count the power of telling your own per­sonal story.

Here’s a real-​​life exam­ple. One of my clients was an inven­tor and entre­pre­neur. His prod­uct was a back­pack with spe­cial, large straps that made car­ry­ing it a lit­tle more comfortable.

The funny thing is, after some ques­tion­ing I later dis­cov­ered that he lost one leg in a car acci­dent. After some prod­ding, he con­fided that his inven­tion was the result of want­ing to lessen the pres­sure of the backpack’s weight on his shoul­ders because of his sin­gle leg.

At first, he felt his story was insignif­i­cant. Since most hik­ers are two-​​legged and com­prise the bulk of his tar­get mar­ket, he con­cluded that his story would take away from the ben­e­fits of his product.

Well, I told him to cap­i­tal­ize on his seem­ingly “insignif­i­cant” story.

Even though he wasn’t a hiker, the news release talked about his lack of one leg as being the inspi­ra­tion behind the cre­ation of his back­pack. The head­line? “One-​​legged man light­ens hik­ers’ loads.”

The key is to be able to cap­ture the inter­est of reporters who are bom­barded with lit­er­ally thou­sands of news releases each and every busi­ness day.

As in this case, human inter­est aspects are won­der­ful tools to spark inter­est. Adding a spe­cial human ele­ment or some emo­tional appeal — even blend­ing it with an impor­tant social issue — will up your chances.

Don’t Inform, Connect!

For a great sam­ple of an effec­tive news release, take a look at this one by work-​​at-​​home mom Leslie Spencer. She oper­ates an online pro­fes­sional asso­ci­a­tion called “Home-​​Based Work­ing Moms (HBWM),” which offers edu­ca­tion and resources for moth­ers who run home-​​based busi­nesses.

Her goal was ulti­mately to get expo­sure to, and to increase mem­ber­ships of, a spe­cific tar­get mar­ket. (By the way, Leslie fol­lows another impor­tant rule of online mar­ket­ing — niche mar­ket­ing, which is also a great way for gain­ing atten­tion from the media.)

She wrote an excel­lent news release that suc­cess­fully tied-​​in the ben­e­fits of her busi­ness with the cur­rent chal­lenges faced by most stay-​​at-​​home moms — women who want to be more involved with their chil­dren while at the same time con­tribut­ing to the family’s income.

Her news release, enti­tled “The New Entre­pre­neur: Shorts, Shirt  and… a Stroller? Moms Find Ways to Com­bine Career with Chil­dren,” pro­vides the media with a great story to tell.

That said, you may feel that you’re not a skilled writer — either that or you prob­a­bly don’t have the time to write one let alone dis­trib­ute it.

The fol­low­ing are great sources for help in writ­ing, tar­get­ing, and dis­trib­ut­ing news releases, par­tic­u­larly elec­tron­i­cally. Many pro­vide the full ser­vice while oth­ers only pro­vide guide­lines as well as lists of media contacts.

Tar­get Your Mar­ket… And Your Media

A news release sent to the gen­eral media often gets lost in a sea of oth­ers. Most often, it will end up on some editor’s desk where your story will be screened and, if judged news­wor­thy, passed along to a par­tic­u­lar reporter in the organization.

How­ever, spe­cial fea­tures writ­ers, colum­nists, radio show hosts, news anchors, spe­cial­ized media rep­re­sen­ta­tives, spe­cial inter­est pub­lish­ers, trade pub­li­ca­tion edi­tors, spe­cialty chan­nel pro­duc­ers, radio show (or seg­ment) hosts and so on are par­tic­u­larly beneficial.

First, a news release sent to a spe­cific per­son (and not the gen­eral news­room or media entity) has def­i­nitely bet­ter chances of being noticed and reported — it doesn’t have to go through so many hands.

While it may require a lit­tle research, remem­ber that the media are made up of peo­ple too. They like the per­son­al­ized approach just as much as your clients do.

Sec­ond, tar­get­ing your news release is far more effec­tive, for the results you want your release to achieve will be sub­stan­tially higher when reported in a medium that tar­gets your spe­cific mar­ket as pre­cisely as possible.

Ask the fol­low­ing: “Where does my niche or tar­get mar­ket hang out? What do they read? What shows do they watch? What pro­grams do they pre­fer? To which ezines or blogs are they sub­scribed? What web­sites do they surf? On what dis­cus­sion boards or forums do they par­tic­i­pate? With what asso­ci­a­tions or trade orga­ni­za­tions are they affiliated?”

The media’s great­est con­cern is their audi­ence and espe­cially their rat­ings (because it leads to adver­tis­ing rev­enue), not the sto­ries on which they report. There­fore, tar­get­ing your media is just as impor­tant as tar­get­ing your market.

Often, spe­cial­ized pub­li­ca­tions or media will be much more recep­tive to your news release than a larger, more generic entity, since it specif­i­cally and more directly relates to their audiences.

But the added ben­e­fit is, not only your chances of being reported will increase, but also you will, in turn, attract qual­i­fied, tar­geted prospects.

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  • A few extra tips that no one every talks about in press release writing.

    I was interviewed by about 20 different radio stations before I discovered "the secret" to getting ongoing media exposure.

    And when I applied this secret it got me on a show that fed to 40 commercial radio stations repeatedly for over 2 years.

    I appeared on that show for 2 hours at a time and I was allowed to do a full on pitch for my product at the end.

    I used the same secret to make the front page of the newspaper repeatedly and get on TV news.

    I turn down more media coverage in a year than most people will get in a lifetime.

    What is this secret.

    Write your press release in pairs and pitch the next story before, during or immediately after your interview...
    http://www.copywriting1.com/2007/03/6-rules-to-...

    Also most press releases are waaaaay too long.

    If you can't do it on one double spaced page you've got a problem.

    Because reporters and radio hosts will only read the first page.

    Anything else is superfluous.

    The objective is to get the media to call you for more information as Michel suggests.

    But it goes further than that.

    If you're smart you'll include suggested questions...that way your reporter or radio host doesn't have to do any work.

    Just call you up and ask the questions.

    See a proven press release template here...
    http://www.copywriting1.com/2007/03/press-relea...


    Finally, while free publicity can be enormously profitable most people make peanuts if anything...just thrilled they got "exposure".

    That's just about as STUPID as repeatedly paying for image advertising to "get your name out there".

    You need to measure the response you get from your free publicity because it ain't free.

    It takes a lot of time and effort to get yourself on radio, on the television and in the newspapers and magazines.

    It's just another form of advertising that you "pay" for with high quality content and the time and effort it takes to give a good interview...
    http://www.copywriting1.com/2006/07/radio-copyw...

    I have met very, very few people who really have any idea how to convert free publicity into real income which is a shame because it can be a genuine gold mine if you approach it the right way.

    Kindest regards,
    Andrew Cavanagh
  • EXCELLENT! As always, thank you, Andrew.
  • Mr. Ehi. Michael
    Dear Sir,

    can i ask for help or assistance form?
    Thanks.
  • Oh this is excellent timing for me now that I'm about to do my first press release. Thank you!
  • Mike:

    You just answered a question I was asking myself. Thanks!

    -Floyd
  • Great! I'm glad it was helpful.

    @Ehi:

    If you need help, then contact support at http://www.copydoctormembers.com/ or http://www.successdoctor.com/contact/

    Thanks.
  • Michael:

    Many of your tips are great, but people who write press releases shouldn't be writing only for journalists. They should be writing for spiders.

    A press release that's optimized for the search engines can pull in consumers like a huge magnet. Those consumers can then sign up for an ezine or a free download and enter your sales funnel. They might even buy from you today, even if no journalists think your release is worthy of their time or attention.

    As a publicity expert, I get more questions on this topic than any other. So I created a free press release writing tutorial called "89 ways to write powerful press releases." Anyone can opt into it at http://www.PublicityHound.com/pressreleasetips/...

    It's a very long course--89 lessons in all. But when you're finished, you will have earned a master's degree in press release writing. And you will know more about how to write and distribute press releases than than most professional PR people.

    By way of background, I was a newspaper editor and reporter for 22 years, and I have accepted and rejected literally thousands (and maybe even millions) of press releases.
  • Thanks, Joan! Indeed. These are great points. (And yes, I know of you very well. I've been following The Publicity Hound for many years.)

    And I should have added your site as a resource. So folks, if you want to know more about Joan, please visit:

    http://www.publicityhound.com/

    Definitely a must-subscribe!

    (Again, thanks Joan.)
  • A question for Andrew cavanagh...

    I live outside usa , can the radio stations interview by phone ?

    Or is a personal visit to local radio station neccesary for the radio interview ?

    Michel , As always great tips !
  • I used Press Releases last year, and from now, I am going to send a Press Release with PRweb each and everymonth for my product.

    Joan, I will take your 89 parts course. It's the longer e-course I subscribed to to date.
  • I think the most important part is the section about connecting rather than informing. All too often we speak down to readers and they hate that. It is vital to connect with them for so many reasons including gaining trust and readership.
  • Michael: I'd sure love to weigh in on this issue with some authority, but even after a zillion press releases, I still tend to write them like miniature ads.

    Guess I'm newsworthiness challenged.

    Good advice as always!
  • Here is a great article on the Secrets of Sending Press Releases. It looks at a few of the best practices of PR and media professionals. Check it out. Thanks -The Dimano Marketing Team

    http://dimanomarketing.wordpress.com/2007/06/19...
  • Hi Michael!

    Nice resources, thanks.

    I can't agree with Joan enough, and yes, her work is a must-subscribe/must-read!

    Here are a few resources you and your readers would definitely appreciate, as great follow-up material:

    1. PRWeb.com and I have been giving away $200 PRWeb.com Premium press releases away since April 2007, details for anyone to claim theirs today are here. By the way, prior to our launch, PRWeb.com has never offered any one a gift/bonus of this magnitude before. We have an unique partnership that I treasure, and feel humbled to have.

    2. I have an unique Online Press Release series that includes topics like:

    a. Online Press Releases vs. Offline (with diagrams showing the difference in marketing reach both have.

    b. Online Press Releases - How-to Target Your Ideal Client/Customer/Reader

    c. Online Press Release *are* Cheaper, Better, Faster than running a Pay-per-click campaign.

    d. The Internet's Ultimate List of Online Press Release Distribution Centers, ranked by Google PageRank with 1-3 line descriptions of each service

    3. Lesley Spencer-Pyle, is a dear colleague/friend of mine and she writes incredible online and offline press releases. Having been a Public Relations Specialist prior to starting her home-based business, HBWM.com, she has years of experience in writing press releases that gets attention. She also knows a great opportunity when she sees one, and has herself capitalized on her free $200 PRWeb.com press release through me, and we both actively promote this offer to her members; because it includes a PRWeb.com 1-hour webinar that teaches you exactly how to utilize all the resources with its premium package. Having used their services for over 2.5 years, I was surprised to learn anything new, but in fact, learned a great deal from this webinar. Lesley agrees that with technology changing, the webinar was ideal for even the seasoned PR Copywriter that she is.

    Hope these resources help ;-)

    To our success & empowerment,
    Ponn

    P.S. I'm sure you don't remember me Micheal, but I submitted my press release to your forums when I started out early in 2005, and was ripped apart by many members. This was great education, by the way ;-) I was a student of Alice Seba then, and I find that forum thread still survives in Goggle searches to remind of my humble beginnings online. :-)

    My point is: I couldn't write a "decent" online press releases back then (though I wrote them for years as an offline government official), and now here I am a well-paid search engine optimized online press release copywriter, I'm an Evangelist educating and promoting everyone the web (particularly online business owners, such as internet marketers and bloggers who do not appreciate press releases) about their grave impact as a optimal internet marketing technique, and have a unique partnership with one of the web's greatest online distribution centers: PRWeb.com.

    How? Because I write and publish regular and consistent online press releases. I started off writing them weekly 2.5 years ago, and now I write them at least monthly.

    PRWeb.com has the technical resources and incredible customer services, to help all their clients write editorially-acceptable press releases, and ones that are read. Every single press release is read by an editor and *must* achieve an editorial score of 4 of 6 to be published. This human-barrier helps any novice copywriter (a) learn the craft of writing a press release and not over-sell in an "ad" format, (b) learn the art of writing press releases for the spiders *and* traditional media outlets.
  • I am in the beginning stages of writing a couple of press releases for a client of mine. Thank you for the article and instructions to success!

    Carole
  • Love it. This will definitely help me in my press release writing. Being newsworthy is probably the best tip. Many times people like to use press releases just to promote whatever they want, because of the good search traffic you get. But your speaking of truly getting ongoing media coverage. Thanks.
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