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Email marketing subject linesWith spam incessantly inundating our inboxes and people’s attention spans constantly shrinking, some have claimed that email marketing is on the way out.

I say “nonsense.”

In fact, it’s because of those very reasons that email marketing is now stronger than ever before. I personally know of some marketers who have made literally millions of dollars with email marketing alone in recent weeks.

I’m talking about legitimate, law-compliant, optin email.

Remember, the most common use of the Internet is still email — not instant messenging, social networking, or browsing websites. It’s often the very first thing people do when they log onto the web.

Granted, the biggest stumbling block is to increase your “open rate” (i.e., the percentage of people who actually open your emails). And to do so you first need to get your emails delivered and overcome overzealous spam filters.

But once they do reach your readers’ inboxes, the most important step in getting your messages through to your audience is with good copy. And like a good headline in sales copy, it all starts with the subject line.


One thing you may have noticed, particularly of late, are clever headlines spammers use.

Spam subject lines are often a lazy tactic to improve open rates. How many times have you seen a headline in your inbox, only to realize that the email is trying to sell you some sleazy, snake-oil aphrodisiac?

In other words, you get emails with headlines that may seem legitimate, but the moment you open them your “Delete” button gets the brunt of your index finger.

Sure, curiosity may get you to open the email. But they usually end up in the trash if they’re not in your spam folder already.

That said, however, spammy headlines do have something to teach us.

You can improve your open rates using some of the same tactics spammers use, but in legitimate, confidence-inspiring ways that will increase readership and, of course, response.

Here are three of my favorite and easiest tactics I use to increase my open rates.

1. Urgency

Urgency says it all. It’s when your subject line communicates something time-sensitive or quantity-bound, which simply can’t be ignored.

Some of the most profitable email campaigns have subject lines that have some element of scarcity. You see this with subject lines like, “It ends tonight at midnight!”, “There are only 4 left”, “One spot just opened up”, etc.

While the above are examples of direct scarcity (i.e., the limit is directly stated in the subject line), indirect scarcity works well, too — such as an upcoming event, holiday, sale, launch, contest, season, news item, etc.

But don’t just limit yourself to an event. You can also use situations to communicate fear of loss, which inherently creates tension. For example:

  • “When she learned my secrets…”
  • “Unless you do this, you are lost!”
  • “The sneaky mind trick they use on you”
  • “You are losing money right now!”
  • “Are you aware of these 5 danger signs?”
  • “Avoid these 7 mistakes at all costs!”

Fear of loss is one of our biggest motivators as human beings. While the urgency may be indirectly stated, it’s compounded: there’s urgency in the topic itself, as well as urgency in missing out or failing to at least know about it.

Speaking of “need to know,” this leads me to my second point…

2. Curiosity

Curiosity pulls them in. And the easiest way — it’s not the best way but it’s effective nonetheless — to use this winning tactic is to start a sentence, add an ellipse, and continue the rest of the sentence in your email.

These teasers can often drive response rates through the roof. Based on the Zeirgarnik effect, people are intrinsically curious, and an unfinished idea will create a certain tension that will force readers to seek closure.

For example, the subject line starts with “It all started when…” and in the body of the email, it goes on with “… She told me about this website!” The subject says “I’ve never had a chance to…” followed in the email by “… tell you about this amazing secret!” Or the subject says “Don’t leave me…” continued with “… hanging by not responding to this offer.” You get the picture.

However, an important caveat.

Subject-line teasers need to be handled very carefully. It’s easy to lose credibility. They can come off too spammy and, if your email doesn’t follow through on the subject line, then you’ve lost credibility.

That’s why the best curiosity subject lines are those that really tease not by omission but by implication. In fact, one curiosity-building tactic that works quite well is to tempt an open by implying that the answer to a question is within your email.

To help you, take a look at the headlines on the covers of tabloids and grocery-rack magazines, such as Vanity Fair, Cosmo, National Enquirer, etc. Here’s one from Women’s World magazine, sitting right now on my wife’s desk: “I lost 19 pounds eating chocolate!” Other examples include:

  • “The real reason people gain weight”
  • “No joke! Shocking study proves laughter is dangerous”
  • “Is he cheating? Find out with these 6 tell-tale tips”
  • 7 medical myths even doctors believe

That last example uses the third common tactic…

3. Controversy

Controversy is another powerful tactic. The word “controversial,” by definition, means “of a diverging viewpoint,” “opinionated,” “disputed,” “arguable,” “contentious,” etc. Being controversial simply means to be different.

While your subject line may raise eyebrows and convey surprise, dismay, even anger, it doesn’t need to, and probably shouldn’t offend. Instead, tie your subject line to a current event, news item, or hot topic.

You don’t have to limit yourself to your industry. You can use controversial topics outside of it, as long as you link them to something relevant to your readers and provide compelling reasons why in your email to justify its use.

One of my email coaching students, John Ritskowitz, in an email about the power of headlines, used “Dead Man Wakes Up Under Autopsy Knife.”


This was pulled from an actual, recent news story. And John used that headline to show the power of headlines in a small video tutorial for a new copywriting tool he was promoting.

(If you want to know more about it, check out John’s product, “The Copywriters Toolkit.” I highly recommend it. You’ll have access to the above tool as well as many others.)

Take a look at some of the headlines I’ve used over the years on this very blog…

Speaking of being controversial, another successful tactic I’ve seen — and contrary to common knowledge — is to NOT include the email recipient’s name in the subject line.

There are many benefits to personalizing emails, and I still recommend it with email body copy — or any copy, for that matter.

But like with any marketing tactic, once a winning strategy is overused we tend to become desensitized to it.

I suspect that the recipient’s name in the subject line is often an indication that it is a sales message, and the email will likely hit the trash can faster than you can say “spam!”

By the way, Larry Chase’s “Web Digest For Marketers,” an ezine I’ve been subscribed to for many years, has an interesting article on 13 tips for crafting subject lines.

Bottom line, observe what spammers are doing, and apply some of the same tactics to your email marketing efforts. But don’t be clever or misleading.

In the long run, you’re better off to spend a little time using what we can learn from spam and creating a subject line that will really work. The key is to be relevant — to your email message, and more importantly, to your readers.

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Michel Fortin is a direct response copywriter, author, speaker, consultant, and CEO of The Success Doctor, Inc. Visit his blog and signup free to get tested conversion strategies and response-boosting tips by email, along with blog updates, news, and more! Go now to http://www.michelfortin.com.

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  1. From Kristine

    Another great post as always! I especially like the portion about using someones name in the Subject line. I too have always heard (and adhered to) using their first name whenever I send out an email.

    I look forward to keeping that out of the email and seeing what comes of it.

    Thanks for the advice!

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  2. From Alan Gray

    Good points Michel.

    One really dumb thing that a lot of marketers started doing was misspelling, to fool the filters. Those early filters were set up to reject common marketing words such as buy, purchase, free. At the email company I worked at, my approach was unlike SpamAssassin. If people used correct spelling, they had nothing to worry about. The marketers who used spelling obfuscation often had their messages zapped.

    Not only that, but the obfuscation makes it really difficult to read. Steven Pierce does that in his emails … “Unique Sel.ling Proposition” “want to bu.y”.

    In his email today, he talks about forming relationships with readers, but he is destroying that relationship by making his email hard to read.

    The key to getting delivered is not to break up the English language and make your message hard to read, but to form a relationship with your readers and have them whitelist/greenlist you. That’s what I do at NewsBlaze.com

    As you suggest, personalization is also important. Looking back at your spam idea - how many fake PayPal emails have you received in the past few years? What is the defining difference between a real and fake paypal email. The most obvious thing is that PayPal knows your name and uses it in the message. The scammers don’t know who you are so you are “Dear PayPal member”.

    Happy New Year.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  3. From Murtaza

    Dear Michel!

    You have hammered soft point… hardly!

    I have actually used some of them even for my personal e-mailing and it works effectively.

    Thanks a lot.

    Murtaza.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  4. From Jay

    Well done, Michel. From a guy who makes a majority of his living writing emails for clients, you hit the proverbial nail on the head.

    Twoquestions: Do you have any guidelines for the styling of the subject line? I’ve always went initial cap, but if you’ve had better response with all lower case, I’d love to know.

    Also, what about subject line length? I’ve always tried to shoot for 25 characters or less, but was never sure if that affected the open rate or not.

    JW

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  5. From Michel Fortin

    @Jay:

    In some cases, all lower case, or just sentence case (first letter only is capitalized), outpulled “headlinish” subjects where all words’ first letters are capitalized.

    But I think it’s all a question about how you connect with your readers. And “connection” and relevancy, here, is the crux of it all.

    Frank Kern does his subject lines in all lower case. And it works, because Frank is known to have a laid-back, no-nonsense, tell-it-like-it-is style. And that’s why his emails pull well.

    But it doesn’t mean it’s the same across the board.

    Subject line length also depends. But in this case, it’s really a matter of playing the lowest common denominator. Less than 25 characters is good. Some subject lines, especially in webmail services like Hotmail or Gmail, truncate them.

    For others, it depends on screen resolutions. For the wider the resolution, the bigger the email software opens up on the screen and therefore the longer the subject line can be, without being truncated.

    But again, just like sticking with smaller tables for web copy to appeal to all monitor resolutions, I think it’s safe to stick with the lowest common denominator. Personally, I think 25 is a bit low (I prefer 30 or even 40), but it’s still a pretty good goal to aim for.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  6. From John W. Furst

    Hi Michel!

    When you write, “most people check email first”, you are right. I see it in Internet cafes, … , and every weekend guest visiting us wants at least to check their email from my home office.

    Would you share your opinion and experience on personalization in the subject line?

    Some marketers use the ‘first name’ and a welcome phrase. I have seen dates as well, and you begin the subject line with ‘[Michel Fortin]‘ (for your Blog announcements).

    In 25, 30, 40 characters there is not much room? Would you rather use it for personalization (probably not) or to create the much needed urgency, curiosity, or controversy.

    Yours
    John
    P.S. Happy and successful new year.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  7. From Michel Fortin

    @John:

    Not sure I understand your first question, since I covered that in my blog post (about personalization in subject lines). The bottom line is to test — send a bunch of emails with personalization, and a bunch without, and see which one pulls best.

    But in my own tests, personalization in subject lines are lower in response, and my theory, as I mentioned in my post, is that people are desensitized to personalization.

    (Granted, adding the name in the middle or at the end, in some cases, pulled better. Like, “I want to know, Michel, if you like this…”)

    I tested my emails with and without the bracketed branding. And bracketed branding did outpull non-bracketed ones. I suspect it’s because people have filters to recognize mail coming from me, to look for subject lines like [Michel Fortin]. But my guess is as good as yours.

    (That said, I’m a BIG proponent of branding!)

    The third question is what I specifically covered in my post. Focus on urgency, controversy or scarcity, instead of personalization.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  8. From Andrew Cavanagh

    Nice post Michael.

    One of the subjects you didn’t touch on is how to use the sequence of your emails to keep your list responsive.

    I experimented for quite some time with sending a couple of emails leading to high quality content THEN an email leading to a pitch.

    Then I realized how dumb that was and moved to creating high quality content as a lead in to all the products I was marketing.

    A large portion of your open rate is dependent on the relationship you’ve built with your subscribers.

    Think about how you check your email.

    Don’t you scan the From line first and stop on the messages that are from someone who’s in your “good” books.

    If you’re ALWAYS sending links to high quality content you’re going to build trust and your open rate will most likely be far higher than sending your subscribers to one sales letter after another.

    On the subject of personalization I would say the biggest reason the response is lower is because the personalization makes no sense.

    In many cases personalization is just someone’s name jammed into a subject line because that’s supposed to increase your open rate.

    It’s a lot like really amateur sales people who use your name too much..off putting and annoying.

    Kindest regards,
    Andrew Cavanagh

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  9. From DK Fynn

    There’s one other thing that I think helps that I didn’t read above before.

    I think it’s really important that you, the sender, keep a close relationship with your list and communicate with them (send them e-mails) often. Over time, they’ll begin to recognize your name. Your name, I think, will eventually play a greater role in getting your e-mail opened than most headlines will.

    You see, when I scroll through my e-mail inbox, I look at the left-hand column first: who is more important than what. By that I mean that I look for the people I respect the most or am most interested in, then, when I see their name, I open their e-mail without much regard for what the headline is.

    I know this is a bit of an extreme way of looking at things, but I bet you more people sroll like me than you’d realize.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  10. From John W. Furst

    @Michel Fortin:
    Thanks. I mistook your link list of headlines for the related posts section, jumped all the way down to the comment form, and skipped your text on personalization totally. Uups! Sorry.

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  11. From Alex

    What about putting a benefit in the headline … does that work if you’re mailing to a niche market?

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  12. From Jeff Hendrickson

    I thought the email you sent out with the title “what we can learn from criminals” was going to be about Gary Halbert!

    Don’t get me wrong.. I know Gary was no criminal. I read his whole story. And in no way do I think he was ever a criminal.

    Sorry,, had to post that. Thought it might make you laugh as well.

    Regards,

    Jeff

    Author's Website | December 28th, 2007

  13. From Michael A. Stelzner

    Really great post Michael!

    Author's Website | December 29th, 2007

  14. From Michel Fortin

    @Alex:

    Yes, it can still work. But lately, I’ve found that intrigue and newsy headlines do better, especially with email. And intrigue is definitely a big part of the three tactics in my post. Again, the obvious solution is to test.

    Author's Website | December 29th, 2007

  15. From Barnabas Ng

    Hi Michel

    Love the post and timely for me.

    I have check out Larry Chase’s “Web Digest For Marketers. Great and informative site.

    And I believe the 3 tactics you shared would work equally well for any salesletter or website.

    Thanks

    Author's Website | December 29th, 2007

  16. From John James

    I do find it a challenge to get people to open emails. I thought it was because I couldn’t write very well, so I hired a Bellevue Wa Copywriter. I’ll have to wait and see how this works out for me.

    Author's Website | January 1st, 2008

  17. From Franck Silvestre

    Awesome tips Michel. But when your member (my word for subscriber) trusts you, everything becomes easier.

    So getting your email read (after the spam filter test) is a work that should be done BEFORE the prospect subscribes.

    Author's Website | January 8th, 2008

  18. From Money Truth

    Great tips, goingto test it out right away, i ll let you know how I get on!

    Author's Website | January 12th, 2008

  19. From R Johnson

    awesome information, great advice!

    Author's Website | January 28th, 2008

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